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Post by Fate_AL on Feb 17, 2005 16:11:23 GMT -5
So much anger head bout to exploed,
Gun stay cocked ready to unload.
I stay laid back,
Intill its time to get that payback.
You can call me Fate_AL,
Keep talkin shit and im gonna put you in that cradle.
Im gonna chop ya up and put you in a basket,
So now you aint gotta spend money on a casket.
SUCKS RIGHT
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VADER 218
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Post by VADER 218 on Feb 18, 2005 7:09:57 GMT -5
Oh dear...
You've got alot to learn man.
we all start somewhere though...
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Post by Fate_AL on Feb 18, 2005 10:11:32 GMT -5
Yup and I need help.
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Post by VADER 218 on Feb 19, 2005 4:59:29 GMT -5
You're 13, so that's cool. You're as good as most 13yr olds I know. You just need to read some old books. Trust me, just seeing some of the old phrases and style of language really helped me. I've always found it easiest to stick with a concept. Eg; star wars. It's a hell of alot easier to rap that way and easier to add humour into battles. Of course, I'm not suggesting you adopt a persona, most of my favourite rappers are just themselves, and I'm assuming you favour more 'gangster, commercial' style rapping, so you probably want to stick with that sort of shit, but even just to keep an idea in mind for a while. For example, you may choose to rap using alot of references to fairy tales, or maybe use alot of medieval imagery.
I obviously don't know what type of music you listen to but you should check out a couple of tunes that majorly inspired me.
Cannibal Ox - Pigeon
Cannibal Ox - Iron Galaxy
Cannibal Ox - Stress Rap
(just buy their album - 'the cold vein')
MF Doom as Vicktor Vaughn - Lickupon
MF Doom as King Geedorah (the whole album - Take me to your leader)
Vast Aire (1/2 of cannibal ox) and MF Doom really are the sickest lyricists in current hip-hop, and both have said in interviews that reading old books and listening to music and songs of completely different genres has helped them immensely.
This isn't meant to sound patronising - I'm no Vast Aire or Big L myself, but obviously as I know nothing about u I can only tell you what works for me, and assume you know nothing of what I'm saying. The golden rule is to strive to be different, and it''s better to rap aload of interesting but badly formed lyrics than predictable, overused, cliched lyrics with an alright rythm/flow.
Hope that was of some help, and not just a bullshit lecture. Battle me some time...
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Post by ThaWarrior on May 24, 2005 19:35:01 GMT -5
you wanna battle me you must be crazy
Ill pull the trigger and squeeze shells till your face burst.
but hold on fool it get worse
I'll pull the 40 caliber till the left side of your face burst
you after me? your goin to need more then a pistol
im talkin bombs, a whole army, a few missles
all your niggaz styles are lame
why you even trying me in this rap game
come on dawg, you cant fuck with me, im to heartless
plus i got an AK with a fully loaded cartridge
and ill put your little ass in the mondays garbage
this fool is about to start cryin'
somebody call 911 untill he start die'n
i told you im the master, and im not talkin a loss
take me to your hood and ill shit on your boss...
haha you niggaz got to do something now...
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Post by ThaWarrior on Jun 7, 2005 18:23:33 GMT -5
yo dogg im not talking to any of you- my bad i messed up. i was tryin to diss some lady
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